About Nichole L. Reber

Nichole L. Reber is a writer experienced in journalism and marketing communications, especially with an emphasis on architecture, sustainable building, residential development, and interior design. Her career further includes non-profits, publishing, education, and public speaking. Available for speaking engagements and to lead seminars, she currently seeks employment in or around but not limited to the vicinity of Phoenix.

Editing Another Writer: Objectivity Is Foremost

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When writers edit another’s work, objectivity remains key in the hierarchy from proofreading to copyediting and rewriting.

For writers hired to edit someone else’s work, I have one word of recommendation: objectivity.

When just out of uni I hired a freelance writer whose work I took a sledgehammer to. It didn’t need it; my but ego thought the articles were improved with my thick pen. It wasn’t my writing, therefore it must surely need a lot of work. Fifteen years later,
I now use a chisel, not a sledge-hammer when editing guest posts for my blogzine or books of a few hundred pages. Run-on sentences of 76 words I sculpt to a more manageable 24 or so. I wipe away mispunctuation, misspellings, malapropos with a soft brush.
Wanna-be writers
People who’ve already written their book prove a somewhat converse situation. Admittedly the projects I’ve edited— books on sports psychology, an Indian man’s autobiographical story of business in China, a couple’s reversal of drowning debt, and a photojournalistic book of a former Peace Corps member’s life-altering work in Peru— would never interest me enough to even open. The knowledge they imparted, however, was priceless, therefore quelling my building frustration at the author’s literary inabilities. Authors I’ve worked with aren’t writers and are definitely not literary, but while they’re first to admit that, they’re also squeamish to even the omission of a comma.
Tips for writers who lend their editing services.
• Ask the author what he thinks is necessary: proofreading, copyediting, rewrites, actual ghostwriting. Read the piece— but don’t take your editing wrench to it and don’t give a quote yet.
• Break the book into sections, just as you break your writing into processes. This helps to more approximately estimate your time expenditure and give a more accurate pricing quote. One page needs significant rewrites, a chapter needs little more than polishing, or perhaps the overall manuscript lacks cohesiveness and requires some interview time to procure the insulation to close the gaps.
• Meet again with the author, this time with a one-page report that explains what you’ll do, why, and how, citing brief examples. Insist on milestones so you’re both satisfied with the process and you’re paid for work thus far accomplished.

Now commence the actual editing. This part should now closely mirror your own writing process.

Warnings

Set up a hierarchy of processes. Your interviews with the author should glean necessary material to spackle sections with rewrites and cohesion. After which, depending on the project, this may be the time for the author to check the manuscript for accuracy. Authors will usually cry and scream, but remain objectivity. The more changes you allow, the more time it takes, yet don’t fight him on everything; it’s his work, overall.
Don’t go through each page of the manuscript. He will fight over almost every change from syntax to lengthening to shortening parts. If you cannot avoid it, though, be sure to include these extra hours in your rate.
You can avoid this potential danger altogether. Make a list of questions per page. Send them the author to fill in the gaps. Implement those on your own, remembering to incorporate his voice, not your own.
Complete the process by copyediting then proofreading. If you do it on actual paper, use colored pencils, never a red pen.

RNL’s NREL Makes Green Sexy

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Los Angeles-based RNL Design’s National Renewable Energy Lab bears a certain sex appeal, if not because it demonstrates in its design its very purpose.

The LEED Platinum-certified building in Golden, Colorado, houses 800 NREL employees, who are part of the US Department of Energy, in a simple yet compelling 222,000-square-foot edifice. It is, therefore, be one of the country’s largest buildings to implement examples of what we might call Green Three: passivity, Net Zero Energy consumption, and living buildings.

Photos Courtesy of RNL Design

Its composition is of two narrow buildings interjected with a third wing, and all were oriented to capture sunlight for natural daylighting. It is a bit ludicrous to me in this new wave of green building that site orientation is considered so significant; it is, in fact, an ancient practice used the world over, yet one the West is just revisiting. Instead, the RNL design complements these proven sustainable building practices with what is indeed nouveau technology, e.g., transpired solar air collector technology.

While countries around the world still believe insulation is too high-tech to implement into residential or commercial construction, the NREL is incorporating its own methodology, which truly is high technology.

“The solar collector is… the way we get free pre-heated warmed air,” said Philip Macey, RSF project manager for Haselden Construction.

Solar energy hitting the large perforated metal plate on the south side of the building is transferred to the air flowing through it, pre-heating air entering the building, and thereby reducing the need for additional heating energy. A fan draws warmed ventilation air into the building through the plate.

“This process can efficiently preheat the air going into a building like the RSF by as much as 40 degrees F,” according to the NREL’s web site.

“These collectors can get 75 to 80 percent of the energy of the sunlight striking the collector absorbed into the ventilation air,” said Chuck Kutscher, principal engineer and group manager of NREL’s Thermal Systems Group. “We did a wide breadth of research, we covered a lot of different areas, and it was a much more comprehensive study of the technology than we would typically do. It was a totally new concept and we had to develop new equations to understand how it would work. Yet it is a simple and elegant technology that is inexpensive and highly efficient.”

Here are a few other design, building, and use practices that earned the building a 2011 AIA COTE Top Ten Green Projects award.

  • Smart lighting and heating: Sensors determine when the windows should be adjusted for optimum HVAC controls. They then send a message to employees in the respective part of the building to change the operable windows accordingly.
  • Daylighting: The totality of the workstations are daylit.
  • Triple glazed, sun-shaded operable windows: Window shading was designed in accordance to location around the building, as, obviously, light doesn’t hit the entire building uniformly. (The very existence of operable windows in this element particularly thrills me, if not for its retro aesthetics and delivery of autonomy to building users.)
  • Recycled materials: The building was constructed of reclaimed and recycled materials.
  • Thermal storage: A labyrinth of massive concrete structures in the crawl space stores thermal energy and provides additional capacity for passive heating. It captures and stores the heat from the sun and cool air from the night until it’s needed. Then the thermal energy is slowly released for heating or air conditioning. This labyrinth also stores heat collected from the building’s data center, using it to heat the building when necessary. “Pulling outside air through the labyrinth can warm it five to ten degrees before it is further heated to warm the building,” according to the NREL web site.

The firm worked with Centennial, Colorado-based Haselden Construction to incorporate precast concrete insulated panels, almost 42 miles of piping for radiant heating and cooling, underfloor ventilation, an energy-efficient data center and workstations, and an on-site solar energy system into the plan. The thorough consideration of sustainable and green methods from design to construction to use means the building uses only one third to one half the energy used in similarly-sized office buildings, the NREL estimates. The building generates as much power as it uses, hence establishing what Popular Science called a “green tech incubation lab.”

Read more about the project.

 

 

A Brit Dives into Expatriation in Phuket

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I’ve been living in Phuket since 2003. It all began one evening when Mik, my then 30-year-old boyfriend, announced he was moving there to do his Divemaster course.
Expatriation involved his selling his house, his car, and leaving his UK life completely behind. I was already a scuba diver (taught by my dad at the age of 14). In day in the three months leading up to Mik’s leaving, I thought, I am going to Thailand too! I was 21 years old, just out of university, and studying to become a lawyer, but I followed my heart, drawing comfort from the fact that we live in a very mobile world now; if it didn’t work out, I would just turn around and head back to the UK.

Once you know that, you can go anywhere and do anything.
I struggled at first. There are obvious language barriers, and it is a culture shock. I found the exposed electrical wires and general shoddiness of the buildings irritating, frustrating, and sometimes depressing. I had a love-hate relationship with the Thai concept of mai bpen rai (‘Never mind,’ or ‘Don’t worry’). On the one hand, there do seem to be fewer worries here, but when you want something done, it takes forever to get done! You get used to it. Expatriation sometimes sounds more glamorous than it is.
In Phuket you will find many expats. There are some big hotel names on the island– Movenpick, Hilton, Sheraton, and others with falang (Westerner) management. There are good quality international schools, high-class medical facilities, family activities, expat gatherings, and events to prevent boredom and help you become part of a larger family. There are also online groups or forums such as Chicky Net Phuket for instantly meeting friends and gaining inside knowledge.
I find myself mainly hanging out with my fellow expats. The groups are there but I don’t usually attend too many of these events due to work commitments. The expat communities are split less by nationality than by working community, therefore most of my friends are in diving. It is rare for falangs to hang out with Thai people unless it is an arranged party/event, for example, birthday party, or through work or some other event associated with your Thai partner.
Undeniably, diving is a great choice of career. To do it right requires starting with a major investment. Many instructors here have already made comfortable savings in careers such as I.T. before expatriation. A work permit is required to live/work in Thailand, which this takes an initial investment of some 70,000 THB ($2,335). Initially I worked on live-aboards and managed day-trips. That really was the life! Now approaching 30, I manage the dive center for a well-reputed worldwide dive company, proving that a ‘proper’ job is still available to those wishing to settle down here.
My work at Sub Aqua Dive Center means I need the beaches and reefs that Phuket offers, but I am also just a short hop to Singapore, Hong Kong, Malaysia, Indonesia, and Australia. Home is where the heart is; and my home is definitely Karon Beach, Phuket.
Kerry Leach has her own blog at YorkshireBird. Come dive with her at the Sub Aqua Dive Center.